Unfinished
I have never been looked in the eyes and told
I am beautiful
that’s OK, I am not the only one
I would prefer it be meaningful
sometimes saying something,
is getting something done
I am Unfinished, a work in progress
if you can’t see my beauty
that is OK, I am not done yet
you aren’t my strength, I am, truly
and my belief in me is all I need,
but not all I want, you can bet
I am Unfinished, my luster has tarnished
Years have left me weathered
some care will make me shine
sometimes old leather is better
and a patina’s story of past glory
gives beauty to the battle against time
I am Unfinished, the order is not written
the marathon goes on as I get on my feet
everyone makes it to the end
many I will meet, but not all I can keep
it isn’t who won, it’s about how you run
and how well you earn the title “Friend”
I am Unfinished, my mold was broken
I am created through me
what I do, and what’s left
maybe not your kind of beauty
to see, isn’t to Be, yet try to perceive
until I take that last breath
Unfinished, I will always be
March 31, 2013 at 5:31 PM
Wow, I love this. Well written. Thanks for sharing 🙂
March 31, 2013 at 5:53 PM
Expressed well, right on!!!!!
May 12, 2013 at 5:08 PM
Remarkable poem.l think like you do ,the many are running the marathon,even if the don’t win they will keep the faith to run again.Life’s journey doesn’t begin in the womb and in the tomb it doesn’t end.Thank you for liking my post (Loving my woman…My wife) Regards.jalal Michael
May 12, 2013 at 7:14 PM
you are welcome, it was a good post. Life is a marathon, you keep running until it ends. we all make it there, some just run further, and longer than others 🙂